Feedback For My Cheesy Dialogue, Bland Characters

Hi! I really need feedback for my first chapter. I've had it for a while, but whenever I reread it, it gets worse??? I've rewritten it a few times before, but I've never really gotten candid feedback through comments, so I'm stuck asking for criticism again. The first chapter in this story is meant to be a bit mundane, but I don't think the average reader will find anything of substance in it. Of course, I know what's important in the story, but on a first read for a third party, it's completely void. This seems to be a common issue for me where I understand it but nothing's coming through or I appreciate things that others might not. I've had this story for years now, so I can't separate myself from it lol.

Its a soft, urban fantasy story, btw.

I'll send a PDF to whoever wants to read~I don't want to inflate reads or anything on the actual story online.