First Chapter Review [Fantasy] - Harrow: The King Thereafter (~1,600 words)

I have started to write a book. I have around 6 chapters laid out in varying states from virtually complete, to a few jotted thoughts and ideas. I am looking for thoughts on, as well as criticisms of my complete first chapter.  Is the scene I have created vivid enough for you to imagine it in your mind? Do you want to know more about the main character and the woman he dreams of at the pond? Is the idea that the whole chapter was a dream and Kohl had fallen asleep by the pond at some point clear by the end of the chapter, or is the reader left confused in the end? I expect this first story to take at least 30 chapters to resolve and as a whole for it to continue into further volumes. I am terrified that my idea is really not as good as it feels or reads in my head, and sometimes it can get hard to write more. I wonder if I am wasting my time playing fantasy and make believe, or if I actually have a story worth telling.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g1miZ7rH19iI5ZFONl7PuolLbNk8fXR3hIlrc9LSbTw/edit?usp=sharing

Thank you for your time and consideration,

 G. G. Van Gieson